Reworked my bird guy after suggestions from Carllo. was not able to implement everything he suggested, like a new pose and different armor... but oh well. i wanted the armor to feel more unified
I love the color palette you've gone with. I would rework the tail -- instead of it sticking out straight like a paintbrush, curve it parallel to the sheath of his katana and you'll get double emphasis on the form / silhouette and I think it will look more unified and organic / flowing.
This guy could tie back into Azura!! http://swiftwrath.blogspot.com/2012/01/talon-greyfeather-designs.html
hah yea now that you mention it, the tail could definitely use some reworkin. I really should, but I am working on new pieces instead, so for me it is one of those "i will just learn from this and move on" kind of deal..
while I was recoloring it, i noticed a bunch of thing that I would change in the design, that it made me want to make a new version. could be down to relate him to talon Gfeather.
I love the color palette you've gone with. I would rework the tail -- instead of it sticking out straight like a paintbrush, curve it parallel to the sheath of his katana and you'll get double emphasis on the form / silhouette and I think it will look more unified and organic / flowing.
ReplyDeleteThis guy could tie back into Azura!!
http://swiftwrath.blogspot.com/2012/01/talon-greyfeather-designs.html
http://swiftwrath.blogspot.com/2012/01/talon-greyfeather-head-concept.html
http://swiftwrath.blogspot.com/2012/02/talon.html
hah yea now that you mention it, the tail could definitely use some reworkin. I really should, but I am working on new pieces instead, so for me it is one of those "i will just learn from this and move on" kind of deal..
ReplyDeletewhile I was recoloring it, i noticed a bunch of thing that I would change in the design, that it made me want to make a new version. could be down to relate him to talon Gfeather.