Notes? I probably won't have time to change much, if anything, before class Sunday but the green jacket / green shirt is bugging me a little. I worry his actual outfit is kind of boring, but also worry that doing too much to it will make the overall character too busy. Might just noodle with some textures / splatter brushes to rough up what's there a little more.
Nice! The gun definitely reads a lot better than in your other designs (maybe because it's in profile?). What is it exactly about the shirt and jacket that bothers you? Maybe you could try desaturating just the shirt part a little bit.
ReplyDeleteI think his outfit is probably fine--that's not what you want the viewer to be looking at, anyway. If it's worrying you, maybe make just one detail on the outfit that pops (a badge or armband or something). And I think it might be cool if you made the bullets a lot bigger.